To raise the grade, do the following by Wednesday night, November 17, and please e-mail me when you are done:
Biggest difficulty: Your explanation of the Conflict is erroneous, I believe, because you mistakenly talk about the conflict in Hatchet, at first, and not the beginning conflict in The River.
Provide more, and more precise, examples of t-p in chapters 17, 19-24.
Revise and strengthen your traits paragraph!! More elaboration of examples/specifics is needed.
More substantial support from the text is needed for your summaries of 17, 19-24. Where are the quotes I asked for??
Your intro. and conclusion are strong. Good job.
You need to critically review your writing and the thoughs/content in your writing two or three or four times before you say it is complete.
Grade earned is 83.
To raise the grade, do the following by Wednesday night, November 17, and please e-mail me when you are done:
Your intro. and conclusion are strong. Good job.
You need to critically review your writing and the thoughs/content in your writing two or three or four times before you say it is complete.
Thank you.
Yours,
Mr. Baskin